A rough draft.
I handed this in two weeks ago, as my final project, and you are welcome to read it.
It’s called Loner’s Clubкомпютри втора употреба, and it’s a feature length script, which means it’s a 120 pages, because each page equals a minute of screen time.
You should also know that first-time characters are capitalised, as are sounds, and that any and all criticism is welcomed with an open mind.
Good Luck, and remember, it’s a rough draft.